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Fluffing up a Boring Secondary Character:
How many times have we read through a story and found one or two
secondary characters that just seem flat? There's something missing
there. Well, friends, there's a simple technique that's guaranteed
to instantly fluff up a secondary character. Here's the basic
formula:
Interesting perspective = Interesting character.
Okay, so what's that mean? Perspective boils down to a specific
like or dislike and why. And the most interesting perspective
is one that opposes our hero or society in general.
Let's say our hero loves puppies. She works at a dog shelter
and her life is about helping puppies. Now imagine in your story
that a friend of her love interest needs a character fluff. Simply
add an opposite perspective: he hates puppies. But that's not
enough. He needs an elaborate reason why he hates puppies: they're
messy, they're needy, they poo all over the place... This instantly
adds character dimension to his character and it can be done in
one scene. It adds insight to his character (why does he hate
puppies) and conflict with the hero. And it's wicked easy. Try
it.
Now this technique generally works best when you need to spruce
up a secondary character and the key is aligning this perspective
against the hero and/or society in general. By that I mean heroes
usually represent the good in a society or culture and this character
would oppose this. However, there are heroes who oppose what society
feels and this secondary character would suddenly become more
important--representing a culture's beliefs. The point is to choose
a perspective in opposition to the hero because he or she will
have most of the screen or page time in the story.
The technique also works, to a lesser degree, to help dimensionalize
a main character. Usually this takes the form of exhibiting an
interesting perspective on something not directly in the story.
We may find out that our wonderful hero hates puppies. The reasons
why can add layers to an already interesting character. Be careful,
though; this kind of thing can backfire on you. If you expose
one of these dimensionalizing characteristics too early in a story,
you could alienate the audience.
The key to this technique is to define an opposite perspective
to what our hero or society believes and then coming up with reasons
why this could be. It's the recipe to an instant and easy character
fluff.
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